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Shedding



Shedding

FORTUNE COOKIE ONE

What sheds doesn’t slough.
It disintegrates.
One is chosen.
The other inherited.
Both are memories
left out
in the rain.

The father is a widower now,
He still folds his wife’s old T-shirts—
his ritual of
remembrance.

The son lives alone,
three miles down,
He keeps a box of
unopened
sympathy cards
beneath his sink.
They don’t shed.
They come apart slowly—
old insulation
touched by
too much humidity,
years pressing at the seams.

On the way to
pick up his father
for their trip to
The Home Depot,
the son wonders
whether his father
still dreams
in Chinese.

The son drives.
The father grips the door
with dramatic patience
He mutters to son
“This is not
a runway.”
Then,
“It is
a meat locker
in here.”

The son turns down
the AC,
but not by much.

At The Home Depot
they stand
beneath the wall
of thermostats—
men deciding
how warm
they want to be.

After looking at,
comparing and arguing
about fifteen models
they settle on one
and buy it.
The son feels confident
he can
install it.
The father fears
they’ll need
an electrician—
someone who knows
how to touch wires
without remembering
what they used to power.

FORTUNE COOKIE TWO

On Sunday
they choose a flea market
instead of church.
There are bins of vinyl
and a booth selling socks
that say BEST DAD in red bubble font

The son shrugs into a corduroy jacket
that fits exactly wrong
in all the right places.
The father says nothing.
He buys the son boiled peanuts
from a vendor woman with a one-eyed dog
and a gravel voice.
She says,
“You two got
the same shoulders.”
The son nods,
pocketing the currency
of the compliment.

Driving home,
the air is full of Dolphins talk—
This might be the year.
The son jokes about the rookie QB’s throw.
The father counters,
“He’s just raw. Give him a season.”
They agree to renew
their tickets.
Two aqua seats, side by side.
They have never witnessed
a championship.
They have never witnessed
each other’s full grief.
But some teams rebuild.
And some men.

Father and son think
of quiet changes—
not gone,
just arranged differently.
How they say things with their chins,
with the way the father holds the paper
in the sane way that the son hold his iPad
with the way they hold
eye contact for four seconds
then, look away.

They don’t mention
the neighbor who passed
or the teacher who used to hum
in the hall.
They hold their questions—
a newly fired vase
that must cool
before it can be touched.
“Do you think Mom regretted not traveling?”
“Why did you quit music?”

FORTUNE COOKIE THREE

At home,
they try to install the thermostat themselves.
The father reads the manual aloud
while the son scrambles
behind drywall
to find the right wire.
The screen blinks “Error.”
They laugh.
It feels good.
They agree to hire someone
from Task Rabbit—
one who knows what warmth requires.
He will come
the second Tuesday of next month.

Later, they sit on the porch
with watermelon and tea.
The father mentions Greece.
The son says,
“There’s a ferry to Ithaca
I saw it on YouTube.”
The father smiles.
“I want to dance at your wedding,
even if it’s just a lean-back.”
The son says,
“I’ll spot you.”

Dusk colors everything,
even memory.
The father waves from the driveway
as the son pulls away.
The car disappears
past the neighbor’s fence
that still needs mending.

And then—
the father texting I miss you
even though he meant
I wish you’d visit more,
and
I don’t know how to say
I don’t know you enough.

Comments

One response to “Shedding”

  1. clcouch123 Avatar

    Your poetic storytelling is grand. I am engaged throughout, wanting as I read to keep going.

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