Even though she couldn’t swim, Lena would go down to the river. She wore a blue bathing suit and carried a pink swim ring.
She would awkwardly dip her tiny feet in the current and feel its cold sting on her tiny ankles and toes.
As the water grew warmer she would go further until the swim ring floated freely above her chest.
There was a green-brown ooze that ran perpendicular to what looked like the shallow part of the river that caught her eye.
Her feet touched the bottom easily and her shoulders were still above the water. She felt she could go comfortably farther without the ring.
She tested it. She let go of the ring, plunged into the water, pushed her her feet off the bottom and emerged safely, securely through the pink circle.
She moved a little bit further, let go off the ring and tried to push her feet off and couldn’t. Beneath her, just watery deep.
Lena reached for the ring, It had floated downstream. She screamed. Water and mud in her mouth drowned it out.
The foul river ooze was choking her, suffocating her. She was sinking. She hoped someone would see her, prayed someone would see, hear her.
A glint of yellow suddenly appeared. A stranger in a yellow cap, one too small to contain his head, had grabbed her hand and tugged her to the shore.
He put the yellow cap on Lena’s head, placed the pink swim ring down her body. He smiled. Patted her head. Smiled at her, again. And disappeared suddenly as he appeared.
The fact that you thank God she doesn’t drown hints at the allegory that is going on beneath the drowning surface. God has very much everything to do with the final result in the poem.
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