he knows the earth beyond all
seeds
the earth
that is untroubled
in the scorch of afternoon
light
the petals
of the angry sun
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he knows the earth beyond all
seeds
the earth
that is untroubled
in the scorch of afternoon
light
the petals
of the angry sun
I like this a lot. I know you work hard to get the stanzas the right way but I think if you closed some of these lines it would be more impactful. Just sayin’